Since the person is walking to stage left... perhaps waiting until he was between the pole and frame left would place him better in the shot. From a personal preference, I'm not overly fond of this style post-processing. I know that everyone is different, so I won't take off for that, but I do feel it competes with your main subject.
Interesting and dramatic feel to this. I like the B&W and the high contrast. Great whites and blacks. Personally though, I'd prefer a subtler post processing treatment.
Wasn't sure at first, but I've decided I do like the glowy processing - has a sorta surreal feel to it that somehow matches the shot itself. Love the building. My only suggestion (and I know it's a freakin' silly suggestion) would be to have let the gentleman walk two more steps to the left.
Interesting setting. The train track, man with the umbrella and of course the tire service make a great combo. I think would of like it even more you pushed the man more to the edge on the right and included more of the Tire service.