this is obviously a very odd scene...and everything screams street photography...and the body position and interest of the spectators is fascinating and the walking icons with arrows are cool...but I still feel something bigger is missing from this...it most likely is just me...sorry
This is just too cool for school, or whatever the saying is these days. You just have to wonder what comes next. Catching the others watching is icing on the cake.
not sure what I'm seeing here, but I do feel a more square crop removing most the right side past the spectators would keep my eye on the girl and not wandering out of frame.