Another of a long list of pictures where I feel the photographer was just walking down the street snapping random photos. Your post processing has oversharpened the image. One thing that could help is if you'd crop this as a square and frame her in the center of the shot. As it is now, the stuff on the left of the shot pulls the eye away from the person walking in front of the door.
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