I love the feeling you have captured here, very intriguing.
One thing i would suggest that would make it look more unified is to take away that bright lower right corner, it seems to lead your eye away from the rest of the image. Great picture tho, i really like it :)
Ah! I remember this photo from the first time around. It is definitely one that strikes you. Bumping you up a point this time around for such pleasant color mixed with such action. The yellow in the corner is a little distracting, but not so much. Bumped to a deserving 7.
This picture makes me go "HUH?". I think that is kind of what you were going for though. Very interesting photo. The bright spot in the bottom right hand corner is kind of taking away from the overall photo. Maybe you should have cropped that out.