The depth of field is a bit harsh in this image. There doesn't seem to be enough of it in focus to create an effect. A slightly less downward angle may have obscured some of the lines in the floor which are a little distracting.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 8
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating 6.25 Dick
The green wire overpowers your rusty pipe, that's not good.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, etc. 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6
Does this picture meet the challenge?(5pts) Yes
Total Challenge Weighted Average 6 Bill