Just remeber one thing when you are taking pictures with flash, Be sure there is no window in front of you :-) The fence there seems to be in way of the subject, I also think you could have cropped a bit of the right side as there seems to be some more space there than on the left and leaves the picture kind of unbalanced, anyway Good luck :)
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating 5.50 Dick
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 4
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 4
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 4
The glare in the upper left is distracting. I'm not sure the top half of the picture is adding anything to the image either. If the shot was taken from an angle that completely covered the grafiti in the chain link fence, it might have been interesting with a tight crop.