I'd be very interested in learning how you accomplished this. This looks like a double-exposure - can you do this with a digital camera? The only thing I do not like about this photo is that the lamp on the right is too bright.
Any memories that I have along this line don't include a "made" bed! And, sorry, but for me, "romantic getaway" doesn't really fit this scene - this looks more like "Days Inn near the Motorcycle Races". lhall
Are double exposures allowed? I hope so. Lets assume they are then. The light is a dramatic feature, and is not dramatically highlighting the primary subject which is the challenge. Sorry to have to deduct points from an otherwise creative piece of work.
I really like the idea here. The setting isn't all that great. Shooting closer (cutting out most of the room) and getting rid of the ugly bedspread would help. Even just a close up of her on a pillow with part of a sheet over her - not even seeing the light - would be nice. ~indigo997
It never ceases to amaze me the extent some people will go to just to get porn into this. They will stretch the challenge almost to the breaking point. Even though it is a very unique photo and I'm not sure how you did it your grade is the same. Take this to a porn site where you might get better scores.
Interesting, but the colors are slightly muted giving it a flat look. Maybe some saturation (difficult with skin tones) or bumping up the contrast a bit? karmat