I'm struggling to see the people details here. It's a nicely composed shot, but the lighting spoils the subjects. I would prefer better lighting on the people or else totally silhouette them maybe with the sun directly behind one of them.
I think the shot could have been much better if it wasn't for the hotspot on the wall and where the sun is. The wall is very interesting but the hotspot just kills it.
Nice image - Like the interesting composition and the feel to this - The hotspot on the wall though is too distracting and burns out too much detail in the wall - Still a nice feel to this
Cool idea, unfortunately the blown out sun means it's difficult to take your eyes off it, and of course from this perspective we can't see the detail of their faces.