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10/12/2008 09:32:06 PMPost actions
a very good set up and beautiful model ... I would like to see levels and contrast up a bit to get the image to POP
try tweaking in post
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10/12/2008 07:04:22 PMPost actions
pretty model and nice idea here - i just wish she were illuminated a bit better
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10/12/2008 06:29:03 PMPost actions
Lovely shot, but that branch that parallels her spine really bugs me the more I look at the photo. Still a strong shot.
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10/12/2008 04:26:02 PMPost actions
I don't like the perspective on this image. And snow white fell asleep after biting the apple, so your model's eyes should be closed...
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10/11/2008 06:18:10 PMPost actions
very good concept, love POVs like this, but I'd like to see the hand open a little more and relaxed, a half-closed eye, and that branch near her head moved!
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10/11/2008 11:06:21 AMPost actions
I like the idea, but the lighting seems a bit flat. I like the DOF too.
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10/10/2008 03:15:32 PMPost actions
Good model for Snow White, although I may have selected a pastel of lighter color for the dress. Her face is OOF but not by much. A much shallower DOF and positioning her hand a little closer to the camera would have been more effective IMO. Image feels a little flat like it could use a boost in contrast and a tweak in levels. All JMO of course. :-) Good luck in the challenge.
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10/09/2008 03:00:33 PMPost actions
closed eyes would've been better... and lighting seems a bit flat?
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10/09/2008 01:08:34 AMPost actions
Lacking a little sharpness, not a correct period dress, and the stick on the right is distracting, but otherwise well done.
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10/08/2008 10:43:53 AMPost actions
Nice model for this title
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10/08/2008 10:00:34 AMPost actions
Great idea but a little flat. If you darkened the background it might have been more dynamic.
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10/08/2008 07:44:37 AMPost actions
The contrast is a little flat, but I really like this picture.
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10/07/2008 07:33:33 PMPost actions
I love the viewpoint. Good shot.
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10/06/2008 07:45:16 PMPost actions
Good pose and setting, would've liked to be a wee bit closer to her, instead of there being so much foreground. The light is nice.
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10/06/2008 07:06:06 PMPost actions
Nice shot. Could use some more contrast and maybe some burning around the edges. I would have also removed the stick by her head for a cleaner composition. 6
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10/06/2008 03:11:18 PMPost actions
Like the DOF in this, stronger colors on the foreground/Background would help..
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10/06/2008 10:52:05 AMPost actions
her face is out of focus
and the apple would look
if it was a lot more red
to highlight the snow white
theme.
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