The scene is superb with a lot of potential. From a proportion point of view there should be more separation of the models. Great choice of placement for the composition. Lighting seems a bit flat.
Tryied to look up the title in a dictionary but didn´t find it there so I´m not sure what it means. Nice spot and setup though I´m not sure how it relates to the challenge. For this one I think you should have shoot it with lower angel, get down on you knees or lay down and focus carefully. The main subjects seem a litle unsharp and maybe a lite overexposed. Think this image would also have tolerated more colorsaturation. But fine image.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6
How well does it meet the challenge: 5
Total Averaged Rating 7 Autool
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