Very sexy model. Unfortunately the side lighting is not very flattering to your subject. It would help to have a background light or a hair light separate her dark hair from the dark backdrop. the low perspective is not flattering either, as it represents a position of power for your model, where a sexy lady is usually most effectively photographed from a higher vantage looking downwards to show a more sensuous look. Finally her one eye does not have a catchlight so it seems a tad dark.
Please do not take this as being totally discouraging to you, I think the warm tones are nice, the model is beatiful and there is a lot of potential here, it is just not quite there yet. :) 5 |