If the background is supposed to be black, it is not quite dark enough on my calibrated monitor. The dark hair blends in against the background and needs a hair light. Her pose just looks too awkward to me, and the lighting is very harsh as can be seen by the shadows on her face.
On the good side she is a very attractive model, it is taken indoors, and I am sure it would have looked much different if this challenge was done with advanced ruleset instead of basic which makes things very tough for portraits. |