I'd prefer a black background. Perhaps the girl needs to turn her head to face the boy more. whatever you were holding up to distract them had done a good job.
What a terrific shot. I love the low light, and how the whole photo has such a warm soft feel to it. Also, they are quite beautiful children. Nice. lhall
this shot is adorable! love the simple composition and use of texture in background and foreground. this shot evokes a feeling of warmth. lovely ~mcmurma
It'll be interesting to see how many people understand the title (being from Scotland it makes perfect sense to me). Nice photo, well lit on the faces against the black background, although the girls face seems a little defocused. One of my favs this week. Crumbles
Great- I wish they had both been looking wide eyed at the same point but you were probably lucky to ge them both in the shot. Really nice lighting. The littleguy cropped by himself would also make a great shot. 9
I love this picture. The lighting is beautiful and the dark background compliments those gorgeous dark eyes. The only little thing I would change is the piece of fur material below the faces. Because that is the only place that is shows, it is a bit distracting to me. Wonderful job.
Cute kids. The little girl looks like Pippa from the Stephen King movie Storm of the Century. The lighting is good. I like the angle and framing/cropping you have chosen here. With the size restrictions of the site, I know it wouldn't be legal, but outside of the challenge, I would like to see this with a bit cut off the top. to make it challenge legal, however, I think you could crop a bit off the right to even it out and still keep the size limit. Overall nice shot. And wonderful models. Good luck in the challenge. ~Hbunch7187~