Great idea. I think that you need a monitor calibration though. The shot it totally green and unfortunately you can see the shadow behind her so she was not far enouogh away from the backdrop or the backdrop was not lit on it's own. You can also see dark corners at the top of the image where the backdrop was not lit.
A good concept which does not quiet come to fruition. good luck.
has this model shown up elsewhere in this challenge?
The lighting is little flat and the shadow on the backdrop doesn't enhance the image. That hairstyle fails to flatter the model's pretty face. Hope you find these comments constructive. Good luck.
Great concept.. there is something off about the colour of this and I'm not a fan of the shadow behind her and then her toe is cut off that tiny bit!! The model has a nice relaxed honest expression.. like that :)
total emotional response of thinking the image is ...
I'm sorry: bland!!
again.. focus not sharp... lighting a bit dull... especially the "white out" on the ball.
Interesting idea. The lighting is quite harsh however. I'd recommend using a diffuser to soften the light. Also you need move your model away from the background if you want the background to be pure white. Focus is a little soft too I am afraid.
Nice pose though and she is definitely engaged with the camera.
pretty model and a nice idea for a shot - getting the model away from the wall/ backdrop, ensuring sharp focus on her face, and adjusting the white balance so there is no an unflattering yellow tint to the image would really improve this one