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The placement of the two fenceposts frames that tiny railing, giving it far more prominence then it deserves. The huge expanse of concrete in the foreground does nothing considering it takes up a third of the frame. Moving in closer would have eliminated that and possibly eliminated the railing as well leaving the fence posts to act as a framing device for the ocean which should then be focused much better to allow for more eyepopping color and detail. Judging by your title you meant to include the concrete walkway and the railing but a concept does not automatically translate into a pleasing composition. |