I don't really connect this to pj's, Looks like the image was shot more mid day. Maybe early morning or evening light would enhance this a little more....imo
Nice concept, but your photo is lacking in focus and PJs. A higher f-stop might have been the way to go here. Of course, it could have been shutter speed. Try setting the camera on a railing or other stable surface for anything below 1/60s. However, your light is great and your exposure is nice.