If she was a bit farther from the background to get rid of that shadow it would be a very nice portrait of this little girl. Also watch the cropping of the head, either make sure it looks like it was on purpose or do not do it at all. Is there a reason why you took this as a horizontal instead of a verticle shot? I think the extra space fights for the viewer's attention at the sides.
Overall a nice rendering of her which would have been much better with a couple of adjustments. :)
Good luck. |