I like the idea, the lighting is great, I would like the babies left eye sharper like the right side of the dads eye, the top of the dads head/hair line looks kinda funny....jimo.
Cutie! For me, this pic is lacking something, but I can't put my finger on exactly what it is. I think I would like it if the subjects were sharper, but that's a personal preference.
Sweet moment :-) Focus looks like it's sharp only on one of dad's eyes, when I would expect it to be sharp on both of their faces. Also a lot going on in the background even though it's OOF; this might have been a stronger shot with a less cluttered background.