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well done concept for this challenge. keeping the focus on the eye/eyelash is well done. I find the lighting to be a bit bright/harsh. not sure if this is a grab shot or a set up where you might have options. playing a bit with the highlights (bringing them down a bit) and maybe a slightly richer tonality (perhaps even a sepia, b/w, or duotone?) might align to the mood a bit more. This is a nit, but the numerous specular highlights on the mesh seem distracting to me--but I am not sure I would have the patience to go and spot all of those down to black/gray... of course, feel free to disregard all of my comments--you still get a 7 from me |