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Comments Made During the Challenge
10/07/2008 12:46:00 PMPost actions
Would have liked her eyes more in focus. It appears that the tree is more in focus than the model.
10/06/2008 06:58:15 PMPost actions
Focus is a little soft on the eyes and face.
10/05/2008 03:37:47 PMPost actions
10/05/2008 07:08:36 AMPost actions
I'm sure you'll get similar comments to this: The tree is in focus the subject is not. It's not a studio portrait. However its a nice composition with lots of potential. good luck
10/04/2008 03:50:49 PMPost actions
10/04/2008 02:43:24 PMPost actions
focus should have been on girls face
10/03/2008 06:37:40 PMPost actions
I think you might have missed that part about "studio"
10/03/2008 07:32:23 AMPost actions
Focal point is on the tree, not the girl's eyes.
10/02/2008 11:42:54 PMPost actions
Nicely presented, with the tree, but a portrait should focus on the model, not the decor. I like the 60s look. :)
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10/01/2008 06:49:12 PMPost actions
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10/01/2008 02:13:12 PMPost actions
face out of focus, tree in focus....
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10/01/2008 01:46:46 PMPost actions
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10/01/2008 02:37:24 AMPost actions
Unfortunately, it looks like your camera locked focus on the tree instead of your model, I like the pose though
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