Nice picture, I like the way you captured the sun reflecting off the first girls face. Maybe a faster shutter speed would've have stopped the motion of the blanket making this shot tops. Good luck. 7
come on man ..
where is the proportion here ??? Just in the title ? ..
Maybe if U had gone like really far .. n taken a snap where the 2 women are really small compared to a huge ocean !!! .. that would have been really nice.
I like the impression of togetherness against the elements. Showing they were wearing jeans lessens the raw nature of the image though (A crop perhaps) and it is unfortunate that the girl on the left has her eyes closed.
This is a very hard one for me to make comments about - I find some of the image exceptional but yet have problems with other areas. 1) The late afternoon lighting on the faces, hair, and the right side of the white robe is "perfect." What a nice feel! The sky, on the other hand, should not be so bright. Overall - a very nice image. The black-white-line border - for me - is slightly below neutral. (Ithink it would be better without it.)
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 4
Total Averaged Rating 4 Autool
IMO you need a high prospective to convey your title. (little people and a BIG ocean)
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