The colors are oversaturated and you've lost a lot of detail in your reds and yellows because of it. Red and yellow, especially, tend to "clot" when they're oversaturated and it's tricky to get them just right.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 8
Total Averaged Rating 6 Autool