Composition is good. I would have reduced the depth of field so that the dense bush behind was more out of facus, thus forming a very interesting backdrop and being less recognisable. The light on the rock is a problem as the boy is in shaddow. SOme extra light on him by some means would have then emphasised him more than the rock. The bright patches ont he rock currently draw attention.
Nice composition, the diagonal of the rock continues with the diagonal of the person pushing it. Don't know if this is on purpose or not, but it looks good! :).
Fit Challenge Criteria: 2/2
Contrast/Color: 1/2
Composition: 2/2
Photo Quality: 1/2
My Subjective Affinity: 0/2
Where is the creativity? The framing was done well. The exposure is a bit off. The shadows in the background are extremely dark. There are several hot spots on the rock that need to be brought back. The position of the model could be modified to show an expression of strain on the face.
It might have been a nice idea to show the face of the individual with a strained look on his face to reinforce the effort going into this but good idea for the challenge.
CJ
When I view this image I think about the why of pushing stones that are impossible to move. The futility of life rears its ugly head and I'm depressed. On the other hand, humans love challenges even those they are doomed to fail. Is this image pessimistic or optimistic?
It is a good composition... it just might fade away in the presence of many similar shots. Good technically, lacks originality and the 'essence' that appeals.
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