Yes, the item looks immovable, but the description for the chaallenge did say someone trying to move something immovable. It would have been great if the challenge was left further open (ie just Immovable) as this them would have scored better. Even a person sitting in the drivers seat, or leaning out the window would then have meant it met the challange completely.
Some light on the bus would have been better, as I find it too dull. The use of flash or lighting in some way to highlight the bus slightly would have added to this shot.
I am not sure about the crop. You have cut off the front and rear door slightly. Some more space both left and right would have added to the balance of the shot and even a little more foreground(with weeds included) could have helped, especially with the extra light.
this is a great idea (great spot too) I think this would have been helped greatly with level adjustment (is there a person inside? if so it looks like the back of the seat?) perhaps some bright colors to pull them out of all that darkness inside and or a hook/chain of someone trying to pull it just showing the front end would have been better?) just some thoughts! :-) darn I wish I had something like this local to me I would have been all over it with outtakes! :-D :-)
-back for another look :-) I hope you post where this is in your details! :-) this bus has some real cool aspects about it that would photograph fun in future challenges I bet! :-) (ie Closeup someone with their face near the hole in the glass looking thru.... etc...) ;-) what a great location!
I can see how immovable it is, but I think the challenge called for someone to be trying to move it... Also, the lighting is dull and the composition is unimaginative.
Take a photo of someone trying to move an immovable object. I don't see "someone." DNMC. Photo is also too dark without the darkness adding to the feel of the image or enhancing the bus.
The image needs to be brighter on the object. I can't see the relationship to the challenge theme that much as nothing (except time) is pushing against the bus.
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