This reminds me of Kung-Fu Panda when he works in the ramen shop. And it makes me hungry. I like the angle you used, makes me feel like I'm standing at the counter ready to start making some noodles. Why did you choose to go with b&w? It looks nice, but I'm curious what the color version looked like.
This picture is complicated and doesnt make too much sense. I think that the lighting could be better and this picture being that it is black and white could use some more contrast. I think overall this picture should have been a color picture with all the wood and different small items in it, it just seems to cluttered and confussing on what it is your actually looking at.