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09/15/2008 07:02:10 PMPost actions
better if the food were in focus
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09/13/2008 11:37:15 PMPost actions
lacks that little pop in color 4
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09/11/2008 03:03:10 AMPost actions
I realise this would have been a now-or-never type moment, but it would have been a hundred times better if the focus landed on the food she's holding instead of the top of her hand.
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09/10/2008 04:37:28 PMPost actions
Great job on getting a shallow depth of focus, but I think the shallow DOF would have more impact if the food was in focus instead of her fingers.
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09/10/2008 03:56:49 PMPost actions
I would have liked it better with focus on her mouth or on the eyes or on the green thing.
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09/10/2008 02:09:50 PMPost actions
I think the face should have been in focus.
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09/10/2008 01:21:08 PMPost actions
The "thing" is not in very good focus. The focus seems to be on her fingers. I would really like to see her mouth in sharp focus.
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