Ian, congratulations on a new 'top row' photo - I had actually hoped, and expected to see this finish higher still! Of all the photos of Lauren that I have seen here on DPC, this is by far and away my favourite - a photograph that you should be very proud of. Looking forward to seeing more of your work as you further develop your skills - I suspect that it won't be all that long before you have a whole trail of ribbons!
Well lit... nice and sharp. Good contrast. I wish there were a bit more catch light in the girl's eyes to lighten them a bit, but this is a keeper, for sure.
This is rather clever! I recognise the model, but don't know which of the four possibles the photographer is....
The composition and styling is lovely, and the skin tones are gorgeous. My only slight criticism is that my eyes are drawn to the very bright top. Nonetheless, very good work.