Quite noisy, but there are ways of alleviating that. Also, too many 'subjects'. Try narrowing it down to one or two to bring focus in on a subject rather than just looking crowded. Nice lighting.
Excellent focus and detail on most of the shot but the out of focus object front/center draws my attention away from the rest of the photo. It looks like the background is in focus too so I think you had enough DOF to get it all, just need to focus more to the front of the image.