Nice, but the glasses are a distraction, her ponytail is too sporty for the mood of the shot, and the position of her right arm interrupts the curve of her torso.
Beautifully done. I especially like the glasses catching the light. Only thing I'd prefer different is to have the walls in the foreground truly black. 9
I think the backlight would have worked better if at a higher level (behind her head?)-- as it is my attention is drawn away from her and to the feet. in portraits I prefer my attention to be drawn to the face, particularly the eyes. While this is not strictly a portrait, I would still like to have my eyes drawn to her head. I am not sure what I think about the tilt -- maybe she made you dizzy walking into the room like that. :D
I don't normally comment on titles and am by no means a Shakespear authority, but the correct quote is 'Wherefore art thou Romeo?' which translates into todays english to mean why did you have to be Romeo and not someone else... Nice shot btw! Love the white balance and the just right, subtle detail in the girls baby-doll nightie! Just not fitting of the title.
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The silhouette itself is well done. I especially like the translucent nighty. But I would have considered using a different room in the bg, because the details there attract as much attention (because they are the only detailed parts of the photo) as the model. The shiny band at her feet is distracting, too, as are her glasses (she looks like she's wearing glasses).
Mmmmm... Very nice. Just the right amount of silhouetting. I can't decide if I like the tilt or not. I think I do. I also like how she's sort of looking back, not at the camera (or the off-picture subject)
Nice diagonal placement. I normally don't think the borders add much to images, but your use of the thin red line picks uo the red in her gown very nicely.
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