Ooh! If only this were focused more tightly! I want to like this photo more because it is an honest moment of serendipity captured by the photographer. Sadly, it is just to unclear at first what is going on. I give high marks for effort.
I like the idea of this photo - the action and story that it conveys. I had trouble telling what the bird had until I looked at the title of the pic. I'd like to see a bit more sharpness on the birds eye and beak but otherwise I like the framing and colors.