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08/18/2008 09:20:04 PMPost actions
she's pretty :) anyway, i think this fits the challenge well, and it's a cute idea.
but the lighting needs some improvement, IMHO. read your description about having only the SB800 flash - perhaps you could try bouncing it off something, like a DIY reflector? or a wall?
08/18/2008 01:40:15 PMPost actions
You should have exposed for the ambient light and used the sb800 as fill or to add mood or atmosphere or emotion or drama or just plain shadows.
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08/18/2008 09:17:19 AMPost actions
the lighting is flat and without the title there's really no context to the challenge. sorry, but i don't see it.
Comments Made During the Challenge
08/17/2008 10:33:09 PMPost actions
Interesting, though a slightly odd scene.
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08/17/2008 05:26:30 PMPost actions
great red dress and lipstick but the lighting seems a bit too harsh and i really don't understand it - maybe i am missing something....
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08/16/2008 06:55:22 PMPost actions
I like the cargo containers which help tie this in to the occupation, great looking model and dress, my only criticism is the left edge looks a little distracting making that area darker would have kept my attention on the main subject rather than darting to the background every now and then.
Still a great shot and in my top 5
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08/15/2008 08:42:25 PMPost actions
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08/15/2008 02:30:27 AMPost actions
Hah! Nice contradictions. Even the subject of the book.
Hey, wait! That's where my new couch is!
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08/14/2008 11:53:31 PMPost actions
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08/13/2008 06:41:58 PMPost actions
clever idea for the challenge
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08/12/2008 11:10:01 PMPost actions
Great concept but the lighting is lacking. Her face is a bit under-lighted.
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08/12/2008 09:33:54 PMPost actions
LOL! love everything about this shot, just hope the boss doesn't wander in unexpectedly. 9
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08/12/2008 09:45:37 AMPost actions
i didnt read that one yet
butgreat idea 7
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08/12/2008 12:48:36 AMPost actions
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08/11/2008 09:13:20 PMPost actions
Ok, I'm still chuckling. :) Where do I send my resume? This is a really well thought out concept, and a great shot.
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08/11/2008 01:16:48 AMPost actions
Wonderful shot, I like the way you isolated the dress, the mood is perfect, and for sure Stephen Kind adds a flavor ;)
nicely done 9
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