I'm sorry that my comment wasn't helpful to you, but it was just what I was feeling when I viewed it, and had no real reason other than pure first-impression. Unfortunately, first impression seems to be a very important aspect here.
I suppose the floppy disks and '96 dated book are to show us that you have been at it for a while? What a contrast in storage capacity with the flashdrive.
the image really does not draw me in, except to ask the question about why outdated network software and outdate technology (do people still use floppy disks?)
Good concept, but too cluttered in terms of flow and composition. You want one focal point. Look at the ribboners in any challenge and see how clean and easy the shots are to look at.
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