As this looks to be an interesting study in abstract, I am not sure of how it relates to Lawn. FOr people to get it...it has to slap them upside the head. Soothing colors though
quite abstract! I love abstract, but this cropping doesn't seem quite intentional. The bottom right corner in response to the bottom left corner seems to compete... but as far as causing dialogue, it makes you wonder what you are trying to tell here. Not what the abstract content is, but... what is the message you are trying to tell with your composition?
I'm not sure what this is it looks like either a lampshade, or the rim of a glass, not sure how this fits into the challenge Lawn. Googled Rales of Rosemary fairy tales come up. I assume unless I read a story or something I won't understand this picture