You may hear that the foreground is distracting. I think it's very apropos given the subject. SOmething like this always seems somewhat removed and protected from the general populace, and this shows that well.
I'm afraid I don't completely understand your intentions here:
the background is a perfect night shot, superbly exposed, showing a great technical skill.
The foreground is so obviously deliberately blured and invading - but in my opinion it's working against the excellence of your background, and also against aesthetic.
Why ?