Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hiya Doug, nice to meet you.
I know you already know this, so I will keep it short - if he was in front of the sun, much better photo.
Another suggestion is to back off this composition a bit. I don't normally say that, usually I say the opposite! But in this case, maybe the bar he's jumping is TOO simple. A bit of perspective or even a show of the height may enhance your shot.
Happy shooting and good luck,
Mav |