I think it would look better if you cropped off everything below and to the left of the chairs.
Several things would happen:
The subject would fill the frame, the horizon would fall at the bottom third (law of thirds), and the elements would form a triangle (triangle rule).
I love the saturation polarizers give to skies in landscapes, but it's really tricky to get consistant saturation when using them with wide angle lenses. If your final composition were to be the crop I suggested, you could have used a longer lens and the effect may not have been as noticeable. You might have done better shooting w/o the filter and fixing up levels in PP.
I hope it doesn't sound like I'm harsh on this pic. I like this composition a lot, but I think a couple of small changes would make it more appealing to me. |
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