i really like the lighting, but for some reason her arm looks a little off to me, maybe because it was at an inteeresting angle. other then that, i really like it, good job!
Very good shot! I like the lighting and their expressions are good. What bothers me a little is the hand/arm placement on the left side of the photo. For some reason I don't like that her arm is straight on with the camera. It makes it look too uncomfortable/contorted in a way. Also, the guy's hand resting on the wall pulls my eyes in that direction after my eyes leave her face. I don't think you want my eyes going in that direction and leaving the frame. If she wasn't there his pose would look better so I'd be tempted to clone out that arm. Just a thought.