The dirty glass adds a lot to this image. Because of the framing the picture seems to be off horizontal. My eye wants to rotate the image counter-clockwise a bit.
I like the composition and subject - I wish it were slightly more saturated, but I realize that may be the reality of the type of window and perhaps you don't want to stray to far from what it actually looked like. I like that the window is dirty though
Great picture, I love it that the window is scratched and murky. So much detail in every part of the photo. I live in Washington state also, not too far from Bellevue.
I like the dirt in the window, makes the viewer part of the scene! Possible improvements: less border from the window, and slight rotation to make the horizon level.
i really like the dirty frame...i can tell its thru a boat window (used to work a towboat :)
but it adds the gritty framing that seems appropriate to the setting.