Just sitting on the bus with my girfriend looked back and saw that small magnified space in the center of the window, thought it would be a different shot and didn't have anything else for the window challenge.
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i like this image lots, it has couple things going for it, first the pose and the positioning of the girl which i like very much and the expression on her face is a plus, but her hands in the side like that sems to indicate her being nervous perhaps, and that takes away some from the overall image. another thing is the optical illuison that takes place at the sindow. this is the primary point what makes the picture interesting i think ..and perhaps the model of the car that is coming from behind i mean what are the chances...lack of contrast is a issue though.. i would like to see this with higher contrast..great job.. keep it up
I like the framing and of course the idea of the photo, the subject of the older car provides more interest. I found the woman's arm position a little distracting, as if she was not comfortable (it's like she bracing herself) which is too bad because I enjoy a person in this shot, I think it adds context
Not sure what you're trying to achieve here. I feel like the shot is trying to tell a story, but it's not clear enough. The view out of the window is too cluttered, and the reflections are very offputting. I don't like that part of your model's face has been cropped off.
You spotted an interesting number of elements and made the best of less than ideal lighting, yet something about the composure doesn't quite work for me. I think I wonerd if you tried to get a wider angle in a shot like this you may have had a little more freedom in croping for a neater composure?
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