Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4 , Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6 , Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.?4 , Total Averaged Rating 5 . smshats the subject is to central, might could have tried a 45 degree angle.
I LOVE this idea. Unfortunatly, I feel the shot does not do justice to your idea. I wonder what other ways this idea could have been used in order to make it visually more interesting. But I love its statement. Better lighting maybe? Or a closer look? Or interaction with someone? I don't know... 7/10 for originality... would have been a 10 if the shot had been perfect.