This is a nice family portrait, with some happy smiles. I wonder if perhaps the angle tilt is a bit too much. The composition of the pose is not the best - the heads are all squished into the edge of the photo, and particularly the girl is struggling to be in the shot. Perhaps a vertical shot might get them all in frame better, or with such differences in heights, maybe a sitting down pose would be another option. I like the BW, although pay close attention to dynamic range in these shots - the highlights are just a little overexposed. Overall not a bad image and I'm sure the family will like it, but portraits have to be exceptionally good to do really well on DPC. :)