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i really like the "scene from everyday life" feel of this.
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I thought this was a funny idea and great moment. But like some others said, I wish the focus wasn't on the ocean. Really tho, perfect title.
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Great idea, but I'm sure the focus must have hurt your score. The heavier woman seems to have some sort of motion blur rather than a softness from a shallow DOF. And everything seems over sharpened.
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Nice composition...is that girl hitching her bikini bottoms? I like it's fun.
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Still find the composition quite good, and the effect of the sharpening on the in focus water is quite interesting.
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This is a really good shot. I'm curious why you focused on the water though and rather the girls.
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The focus is on the sea water. If that was your intention here – believe the group to the right spoils the shot. In case the woman is envious of the younger people – see no reason why focus is on the water. Good luck!
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I think it would be better to have one of the subjects in focus.
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the persons are out of focus, while the ocean is on focus. think it should have been the other way around?
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I like the idea, and the image itself. I'm not sure if I'm digging on the noise that was added in post. If it was advanced editing, you could have just added it in the foreground, but applied to the whole image it seems to be more of a hindrance than a help.
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hahaha good concept and idea, but I think it'd be even better if there was one main focus. A little confusing as is, but still a great shot.
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I think one or other of the parties would be better in focus rather than the sea.
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Good idea for the topic. Sharp focus on the lady on the left would improve IMO.
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Should have set the focus on the people not the ocean.
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OOF unless the ocean is the object of envy, in which case I love it!
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i would have liked it with your subjects in focus.. nice idea
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everyone is out of focus here, the only thing in focus is the water, would have loved to see the two girls in focus
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I like how this is set up, it's too bad that there is nothing in focus though.
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Good idea, but it´s a litle out of focus.
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Good idea, but I wish the focus was on either the girls or the woman (instead of the ocean.)
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I like the idea around this photo. Your focus is off though. this photo would have been better if either the two girls in the back or hte lady up front were in focus. Instead the water in the background is crisp and everything else is out of focus.
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if the focus on the girls was right, (the focus is on the water), this might have been OK, but as it is it's obviously a misfocused image...
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