Good concept and shoot. Only thing is that I don"t believe her. If she was all dirty and the dress torn up and a facial expression to match- that would have been really good - but it was still done well.
There is no story here, at least nothing I can see. You have to look at the image for a while before you even see the little girl and she only looks like she is sleeping. Wish there was something more.
First off, the location is !perfect! for this type of challenge. But the positions and clothes of the two girls leave me scratching my head. The younger one appears to be smiling as well. That kills any dramatic mood the picture is trying to convey to me. No vote, I'm in this one.