I think this photo has been let down on a few levels, the clarity of the photo has suffered becayse of artifacts and pixelation. The background of your photos is arguably as interesting as the subject matter itself and the background here is way too busy and distracting. It's competing with your subject matter and this kind of conflict will not sit well with your viewers. A couple of suggestions - either shoot against a plain background, use a very shallow depth of field to isolate your subjects and focus attention, or if your background is central to the effect your going with in the photo, then make sure everything is clear and that your highlights aren't blown out.
This is an interesting idea and in spite of the bad technicals I think it shows some promise in terms of creative thought and meeting the challenge 'outside the box' so stick with it! I give this a 2 due to the technical side letting it down.
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