Nice shot but a bit weird because the right eye of the lower model is hidden by the hair and it looks like she does not have an iris...
I love the position of the upper model!
Wow...I really like this shot. It's a very complete image with a lot of interesting contrasts (black/white, innocence/guilt, one subject's intense stare contrasted by the others seeming disinterest). Really...well done. I'd be interested in seeing about purchasing a mountable copy.
Interesting image. Very attractive models. The contrast and skin color on the back one is a bit off (the nose is washed out and the face is greenish.) Nice background.
For me, the big eyes looking directly at me decrease the mystery and subtle hint aspect of your photo. I much prefer the demure, coy look. But I prefer the completeness of this image with regard to including the whole dress.