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06/02/2008 10:24:36 PMPost actions
Pen could have contributed more, perhaps driven into the ground and used as a tee?
Like the DOF and the texture of the foreground.
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06/02/2008 09:42:53 PMPost actions
This is good as far as it goes, but I know Pen and he is much wilder than this. It begs for a much bolder POV and crop.
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06/02/2008 09:02:26 PMPost actions
Super sharp and great color. Pen might have trouble driving the ball though, as its almost as big as him.
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06/02/2008 11:46:36 AMPost actions
Great sharpness and blur and setup. Looking forward to the adventures of "pen."
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06/02/2008 11:29:31 AMPost actions
Pen will probably do a better job than I would lol. Love the DOF. I'd like to see the left side cropped a bit to center the bucket some more. Wonderful clarity on the bucket and balls.
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06/02/2008 11:00:30 AMPost actions
Great start of a Pen story. Perhaps the sky is not of much interest here.
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06/01/2008 10:31:54 PMPost actions
so? inquiring minds want to know.....how did you score?
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06/01/2008 10:18:04 PMPost actions
A pen or other objects for writing never follow me onto a course, keeping score only frustrates me! Looks like beautiful weather for golf and photography.
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06/01/2008 09:50:33 PMPost actions
I used to have a pen exactly like that. I named her Cindy and had her for over 8 years before I sadly lost her.
The DOF is great, nice exposure on the balls, the reflections on the barrel of the pen make it a little hard to distinguish the edges.
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06/01/2008 09:32:04 PMPost actions
Great. Taking everyday objects into unusual places it is fun take on the challenge.
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06/01/2008 09:25:49 PMPost actions
I like this as it is simple and to the point. A great way to start and I feel most of these images are going to be like a story without words.Message edited by author 2008-06-01 21:26:13.
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