Interesting, but the light show in the foreground steals the show -- the night sky becomes just an elaborate background. Challenge aside, it's a really cool image.
You got me googleing the title (in the - vain - hope of some deep significance). A nice way of adding some interest to what could otherwise have been a fairly drab picture.
This could have been spectacular. The squiggle light play detracts my eye from everything that is great...the oldness of the wooden coppola, the mountain, the sand, the color of the sand. I'm sure a lot of people are going to love it, but for me I would rather see just the landscape.
I am not sure why you did the light painting in this shot. I belive it was to illuminate the wooden structure. To me, it would have been better if you had covered teh light source and softened it, that way the structure would have been bathed in light