Challenge:Wheels (Basic Editing I) Camera:Sony DSC-P52 Location: Construction site Bethel Park, PA Date: Apr 4, 2004 Aperture: 1:5.6 ISO: AUTO Shutter: 1/250 sec. Galleries:Sports, Travel Date Uploaded: Apr 4, 2004
Background background background, simply put the frontloader in the background blends right in with the jeep detracting from the picture, as do the wires coming out of the back of the jeep.
You have a very nice object here, just the centered composition doesn't work for me here. I would have concentrated more on a really mudded wheel :) Yours, Jan
ok. but the subject should have been the wheels... and instead we have a dirty jeep, and the title ... is just a plain title... no mystery... no ...subtlety...
It's a great shot, reminds me of Jurassic Park for some reason, but it, to me, doesn't seem wheely enough to fit the spirit of the challenge. The only other thing I would note is that it might have been helped by a slight uplift in contrast as the colours look a little muted... Just occured to me that is probably because it's misty, so scratch that thought. 8.
not very interested in this shot. the fog effect is strange, the background is messy, the lights are distracting, the yellow lines draw my attention from the subject, and very little focust is given to the muddy tires. maybe a fill-flash, tighter crop, and turning the wheels to the left would have helped to draw this subject out a bit more.
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