Excellent portrait and lighting in my 40 years as a professional photographer I do like this one. The only thing is the brightness of the leg could cool it down somewhat.
Before I saw the tilte, was gonna comment on the distracting harsh shadows. Then saw the tilte...guess that was the look you were going for...still think they're a little too harsh. However, I like the compostition and the overall theme. Nice job
I really like this shot... definitely ribbon material in my not so humble opinion. I really like the sort of brown tone of this "B&W" shot. The right side of her face might be a bit brighter, or not. Who knows what the effect would be.