I think you want to show too much here. the left side of the photo doesn't say a lot, and somehow it doesn't work as negative space. try getting closer to your model next time, you'll see that could work better :)
The simplicity of this is quite appealing, but the composition doesn't work for me. I think I would have preferred your model on one third and the window on the other side.
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